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Oh, right. If you wish to present, visit Haiku Heights and this page specifically. You could always simply visit the poets who have submitted pieces as well.
Inspired by the theme at
The Speed of Sound
It wasn't, it is.
Heard something, then all I heard.
Only a moment?
Another Day of Women Watching
The roar of thunder!
The clash, the bang, the triumph!
Still my beating heart!
Perfect video for your speed of sound haiku, Doom!
ReplyDeleteYou know, if you didn't have the title with your second haiku and the wolf woman video, I would have associated this haiku with going off to war in olden times.
Oh! Glad you liked that first. It just dropped on me, oddly while looking for something else.
ReplyDeleteAye, you have a good eye. Love is so close to war in feel, and psychically rather than physically. Well, and if the two parties are honest and sincere? They are actually fighting each other, but for the same thing. There are interesting parallels. *howl*
*grins*
Hey, Doom, I think you've really hit on grabbing the moment by the cross hairs, then giving it a resounding TUG!
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Just describing how, while half a sleep, that happened. Time is as slippery as anything I've worked with. That's saying a lot. :) Moments can seem like hours (stub your toe... or urhm, worse) and hours, days, weeks, and much longer can be moments (fall in love, or even remember something fondly and you are back there in it again).
ReplyDeleteGlad it resembled life for you!
By the way, that first is prophecy, whether knowingly or not. I don't think they always see, or they model it after music that has the keys in it. The author may have thought it was simply random. I don't know that it is correct prophecy, but...
ReplyDeleteReally, it is a reiteration of old prophecy, but put to play in these days.