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This judging is trickier. More options, fewer constraints, no tricks, and I have a soft spot... or more. Do wine and women count? Uhrm, how about song? Yeah, yeah, I've become cloistered by health and a bit by faith, but it doesn't mean... never mind. Anyway, these are among my many and splendid soft spots. Wild, "ugly", furry, and finned. I've had some call to know some rather regular on to radical little and big fellow beasts. But more, I have sympathy with the love others share with the creatures they have met. I can't pick on that basis. And more, haiku rules, when limited, eliminates technical judging for the most part. This time it comes down to those unknown factors that rule a man's heart and mind. Genetic? How one was raised? Or created whole cloth once one cuts the apron strings and escapes school? I think that latter, for me, almost certainly.
I have narrowed the list to my favorite per person. This task itself was no easy task. Like any difficult job though, you just do your best. I was looking for posts that evinced some mental imagery or feeling that was unique among the others. Tomorrow it might well be different, but for right now I am rock solid on it. I think. All fun and games until you are judging haiku!
serendipity (I almost did your peregrine falcon poem, just so you know Doom isn't asleep)
Seven springs they’ve come.
Lord and lady from far lands.
Demanding henscratch.
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Michael W.My heart runs ahead
On four feet, chasing the clouds.
Sleeping in the sun.
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foam
Slumbered, unaware ...
Startled! "What?" .. Sideways glare finds
Clawed cat perched on hip ...
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becca
child's giggles erupt
Love springs unconditional
best friends forever
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fishy
Horrid Chihuahua
Became Mom's favorite child
Winter solstice blues
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Fleurdeleo
Uninvited guest.
Gluetrap, blunt force or poison?
I turn a blind eye.
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BlazngScarlet
Deep, soulful brown eyes
Pierced my wintry March heart
Forever you're home
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Karl
Warm water returns
Friends come to visit, seek food
Provide or become
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Rafael
Huntress preys no more
Eight lives down; just one to go
licks her WOUND instead
I was going to do honorable mention. But you all got it, so... like... why? Seriously. I'm doing this half asleep, if I slept on it so it was there, I did the first honorable mention doodad, copied it, and started pasting it. I got halfway down the list and just had to laugh as I realized the problem as I was about to paste the doodad on the next haiku poem too.
So, who gets the nod? Congratulations becca.
becca
child's giggles erupt
Love springs unconditional
best friends forever
My lawyer suggests I add that; this contest is nonrefundable; that I am not, and not required to be, fair according to anyone's written, considered, unspoken, or other notions of what that means save my own; and that all decisions rendered by this panel of one and a half (been called Tiny and Slim just because people are a bit dim or think they are funny mind you) are final. Bribery does work, if you wish to keep that in mind. Of course, none of you have my address, and if you found it and contacted me the creep factor might make the bribe attempt prohibitively expensive, but that's just a side note to a side note.
Now go out and have some fun!
Congtrats to Becca!
ReplyDeleteThanks for doing such a wonderful job hosting, Doom. Good choice with Becca there, but then I would have said the same to any 'ku you would have chosen. They were all good.
CONGRATS BECCA!
ReplyDeleteDoom, you did an excellent job of hosting and choosing .... thank you!
Congrats to all !
Always happy to oblige. I am simply pleased to see the good turn out and efforts. The contest kept me on some of my toes, too.
ReplyDeleteWonderful game Doom, fine hosting and stellar judgements.
ReplyDeleteBecca....kudos, brilliant haiku
taps a shared joy :-)
Thank you. It is really up to the contestants though, and they put on a rather difficult to judge contest. No complaints here though.
ReplyDeleteaw thank you so very much i knew those chocolate chip cookies I bakes you would work "wink" I will think carefully on this and have a theme for you by Friday. i'll come back with a link so anyone checking in here will see it. thanks again blows kisses
ReplyDeleteShhhhh! Give away all my secrets, woman type! Didn't anyone tell you feeding and telling is a no-no!?! Well, in some cases.
ReplyDeleteGood luck. If you get stuck, just... go to YouTube, type in a topic that strikes your fancy, and watch vids for a bit. It doesn't work for me, but it's great for procrastinating. Before you ask, no, I am not helpful in the least. :p
I'll see you then, there.
Well, now, Becca wins again. With a warm and happy 'ku. Congrats!
ReplyDeleteGreat job as Host Doom, you drew out a lot of Haiku!
Peregrines are quintessential predators, and so handsome. She was a lovely surprise to find!
Look forward to this week's play Becca.
Serendipity
C o n g r a t s, Miss Becca! Thanks for hosting, Doom.
ReplyDeleteVery touching entries, too!
Good afternoon Doom,
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sir for hosting.
Congratulations Becca!
this weeks theme is Searching and here is the Link http://www.everydaylifes.com/2013/05/haiku-searching.html
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