Thursday, December 19, 2013

Haiku Monday - Survival

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As I said, I won't be competing.  But I will still list who is up with what, and maybe write haiku on the topics for my own reasons.  Serendipity is up, with the theme and rules.  I am hoping by linking I won't... somehow become visible, or accessible.  Or I will just do this more quietly.

I do like the theme.  But I am not sure.  I wrote a couple, and almost posted them, but they have been lost.  The last two themes have been difficult.  And I am so blue-collar, as a poet.  I use small words, play fast and loose with the rules, and... yeah.  Then again, I think some people are wrong in how they count syllables.  Though, too, a Brit, Boer, Kiwi, or other, might have different pronunciations, or even counts.  Or my dictionaries are wrong?  People from another generation, or several generations back from me, have... a different take on grammar too.  Combine a few of those things and you get what we got here recently.  Anyway...

I'm thinking... this is a difficult theme.
Sometimes

death is a device ~
with will - as have the living
which is stronger?  choice
Alone in the Wilds

arm stuck under boulder
pocket knife, no help, mean split
sweat, blood, loss, but life
http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2226130/The-snake-escape-Determined-turtle-survives-struggle-anaconda-shell-stops-crushed-death.html
Click to read the story.
My life

not hungry, must eat
don't want meds, must take, no choice
every day struggles



3 comments:

  1. It is a complex theme. I like all three of your haiku, but the last one the best. I get it. I have no idea if I will submit anything this time around. Maybe I will be inspired.
    You know.. Haiku is not about complicated words..

    Hope you are better. I'm hitting the sack. I'm so fatigued, it's painful.

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  2. You may not have seen, but... if you wish to use one of mine, on an off week, be my guest. You can offer it is mine or yours, I don't care. But... you have to take the consequences. Other than that, enjoy.

    Oh, I know that pain well. It finally shoved me into a hard ugly sleep this morning. I am sleeping, but in going around the clock it just doesn't feel like it. I'm still better off than you, in this. But I do resemble the suffering, and empathize greatly. Sleep well ma'am.

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  3. Thank you, I did sleep better.. :-)

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