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A very nice showing for the contest this week! The regulars and the irregulars were called in and the contest went very well. There is something about the raw power of mother nature that seems to bring something out of us? With tornadoes and hurricanes, perhaps it is a venting of all the bitten tongues we have endured for peace. For volcanoes, all of the hidden anger. For lightning, perhaps the will to action, and possibly terrible consequences, that can seemingly happen in less than an instant. All for good or ill, perhaps. Our savage nature encapsulated by our will to do good, all of it in an odd dance that natural phenomena show but in a larger format than what we can exhibit? Maybe. But the draw is there, it seems.
Of those posted, I have shrunk them to my favorite per poet. Uhrm, with the addition, for Colonialist, thanks to the quick eye and mind of foam. Quick, that woman, to note a haiku where no other saw the twist. The contest can get tight, and maybe a little ugly as everyone works it. Well, at least there have been no deaths. There is that. All part of the contest.
It truly was a painstaking effort. Much like looking through a family photo album and picking your favorites pictures of those presented. Odd how those can either stay the same or change in time, but once set, are good for some time. No guarantees in life, not even of our own understandings.
foam,
waves rock the kayak
with quickened strokes I paddle..
lightening heralds doom
Serendipity
High lonesome firestorm.
Crouching ‘neath waist-high krummholz...
Krak! Pow! All around.
Rafael
Lightning's silent stalk
Faster than the speed of sound
Strikes before the CLAP
Colonialist
*Holiday mishaps
In threehundredandfifty?
Very tempting...
Crash, flash, together:
Still alright, but awful fright -
Bright summer weather!
Mynx
Cicada song loud
Scorching heat with no relief
Lightning strike - bush fire
Amanda,
Stalk The Prey, Starving
One Swift Motion Life Is Gone
Lightning Fast Killer
becca,
dreams take flight on wings
wonderment captured held tight
Lightening in jar
Karl,
Foretells coming change
A flash seen then the report
To hear is to survive
A flash seen then the report
To hear is to survive
fishy,
A godly rebuke?
Thor demonstrating his might?
Sky splitting wrath! Woe.
Thor demonstrating his might?
Sky splitting wrath! Woe.
Rafael,
Anchored to Heaven
Lightning bolts from sky to land
Charging life with death
Lightning bolts from sky to land
Charging life with death
Aunty,
Ah, Prometheus,
Would thou steal fire from the gods?
Searing arrogance!
Would thou steal fire from the gods?
Searing arrogance!
Next, to judge. There are always a few that don't show here, but for brevity's sakes. That is the part that is most annoying to my mind as judge. The following are my picks, in no order save that the final poem will be the judge next week. Congratulations! Let's see where your rhyming mind can take the contest. It's good to be king!
becca,
dreams take flight on wings
wonderment captured held tight
Lightening in jar
Karl,
Foretells coming change
A flash seen then the report
To hear is to survive
foam,
waves rock the kayak
with quickened strokes I paddle..
lightening heralds doom
Colonialist
Crash, flash, together:
Still alright, but awful fright -
Bright summer weather!
Nice job hosting, Doom! You did draw in a crowd. What with all these nice haiku! I can imagine choosing our next host was tough! And speaking of next host ...
ReplyDeleteCongratulations to colonialist!
ps: sweet song by Petty, btw..
Petty is no school but the old school. Blue collar minstrel with a touch of the gold. Glad you enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteThe video is very en-lightning! (Someone had to say it!)
ReplyDeleteWow, I don't believe I have been chost! Thsnks!
I hope I can do it justice with a certain disruption currently happening ...
http://colonialist.wordpress.com/?p=4115
Don't thank me, just... hurry up already! :p Oh, not really. I'm always dying to know but never really do. Some have posted as late as Saturday, even Sunday, if pressed. One *cough* even called it off a week. Not that I would ever do that myself. *cough* :P Never mind.
ReplyDeleteDo what you can. After fifty years, you know what's important. If you need to, delay for a week. I'll just be dying a little longer. :)
Good afternoon Doom,
ReplyDeleteNice write up. I enjoyed that first video, the slow motion is very interesting to watch. Thank you for the honorable mention. It's an honor to be held in the ranks with Becca and Foam, two of my favorite writers.
Congratulations Colonialist! I look forward to your topic.
Great week of fun, frolics and poetry! Well done, seƱor:D
ReplyDeleteCongrats to Colonialist...I loves me a good tongue twister. (YUMMY:D)
That said, I'm happily fat in the warm hearth of home and mother goose, so fine by me to skip a week. If not...I'll see about crap'n out a kernel the Colonialist's way, come Monday.
Happy Thanksgiving, ever'body:D
My topic and post:
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Colonialist,
ReplyDeleteGotcha! You play a dangerous game. You encroach on the a.o. of Doom indeed. Oh... I'll play... nice... Mostly.