Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Haiku Monday - The Little Things

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Picking a topic can be a difficult thing.  Sometimes something in recent moments has been dying for greater exploration.  Sometimes a notion just seems to fit.  Today it just so happened that the mundane collided with complexity while thinking on recent endeavors.  Just a few little things to be done, and they were simple things, as crows fly black.  But that they were simple did not equate to them being easy.  So the topic is on those easy little, or big, or medium, tasks that consume all of your wit, charm, patience, effort, energy.  The little things, indeed.

I will stay with 5-7-5, of course with three lines as such.  The extra tidbits of traditional haiku are bonus material.  I love them, when they work, but do not require them.  The seasonal notes, and words that change the direction or idea, or embolden it, are what I discuss.  Several of them combined, even doubled, make for interesting material at times.  Haiku, itself, is simple.  And yet... not?  As for seasonal, if it fits the texture of the notion (spring as an action, or fall for falling), or the actual idea (like spring cleaning), or in some other way(s) fits, whatever tradition actually is, is how I like it.

As for the actual topic?  Pick piano playing, talking to your love about 'those' issues (whatever they are for you two), learning a trick, or social graces, or whatever nagging little easy thing that is wiping the floor with you.  I suppose even if you are a woman and try to drink your vodka while upside down (remembering my notion on limericks coupled with a hat tip to BlazngScarlet just for fun).  So much is so much more difficult than it would seem on paper, and what you can't get I can, and the reverse, perhaps, but... I certainly have empathy.  No need for sympathy.  Yes... show and tell, if you can.
The Grace of a Stream

Spring to writing 'ku.
He could not think a word well-
Let go and it flows.
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Talking to Mum

Hello, let's go, work.
Of course, let's get to it, yeah-
Zzz zzz zzz zzz.  Screech.

Just to get you going.  I hope you do far better than your judge though.  Then again I have not been disappointed to date.

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Oh, something fishy brought up and I and others have been doing and like?  If you can, post your poems on your blog, adding visuals.  Pictures, videos, music videos.  It's not a requirement, of course.  Some of you don't have a blog.  It just adds to understanding, enjoyment, and creativity.  If you got em', and can, roll em' and smoke em'?  Something.  Plus... if you do it, we will visit!  A little ego-visiter bump is always good for the blogger soul?  I, urhm, had forgotten to do that meself this time!  Well... I'm... up!  Now.

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  1. Congratulations again, Doom.
    Easier said then done? Hmmmmm..
    Sometimes things are easier done then said.
    Effectively communicatiing can be very difficult.

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  2. Oh, the topic is the little things .. It's way early.

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  3. I love nipping a little on the bottom side when no one is looking. Sure feel it though, don't we? Take it to your man when you feel it rightly. *cha-ching* Oh, I love you little sister... but through your man in a way only nephilim, of the light, can.

    Still, I love that you got it wrong in your first post, and yet... got it right in a way you don't quite understand maybe(?), when you finally get the mistake... only to, perhaps, learn, that the mistake wasn't as wrong as you might have guessed. In a way. Still, I probably had to spill the beans and you might yet disagree. Nummy! Go get him. I love sicking a woman on her man.

    Then again... I think you get... things. My assumptions I'll surrender. Women are odd critters and know more than I always surrender to them. Just can't do much about my (our) perceptions or reality. Trust me... that is... a nod, an admission. Shush...

    You don't win, but you can't lose... Go tell it to your man in love. I'll remember it well.

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  4. Congrats, Doom...you certainly are...
    interesting(?).

    Everything's hard in my world, apple'd and otherwise, but I'll see what flows and be back.

    SMILES--

    Rafa

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  5. Hey, Doom, something off the top...

    Sunny, Summer's day
    Hang'n out; free 'n easy
    Piss'n in the wind

    =D...sorry

    Raf

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  6. I'm starting to get your idea for the haiku. The video will not open on my mobile device, so I will wait to see it later.
    I'm glad you are humored by my cluelessness. Sometimes the bulb takes a while to switch on in this old brain of mine, especially in the morning....
    Oh, and I promise to not use 'cause' instead of because...unless I have to do so in order to fit them into a haiku or limerick. .. :-)
    Yes, I read your post below, hellboy.

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  7. And if Rafa is peeing in the wind, he must be peeing .. Oh, never mind....

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  8. First I smacked it good..
    Then I squeezed it with both hands.
    It rose! ..Then swooshed off .. •_•

    I smacked it again..
    Firm hands embraced it. It rose...
    Then a wobbled flop..

    Several days later..

    My caressing hands
    embraced the smooth silkiness
    of my first clay pot.


    Nipping a little? phhfft .. I like the way you get it wrong? lol..I heard that. Well, and sometimes I'm purposefully obtuse. It can have it's place.
    Anyway, I liked the video. The song is irresistibly danceable and goes really well with the movie clip. Did you see the movie? I'm a sucker for fantasy/scifi movies. But if I think they are flops I don't watch them.

    I'm hoping to be up later in the week with some visuals. Good theme, btw. It will be fun to see what other folks post.


    Be well, Doom.. :)


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  9. Sorry all. I'll respond after some rest. No sleep since 19:00-20:00 last night, a trip to town then another trip several hours away, plus made supper. I'm shot. I'll get on responses before too long. But first, some sleep.

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  10. Something is missing here... (LOL!)

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  11. foam,

    I just tease you, mostly.
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    I read your poems out loud to my mom. I was... starting to blush, but chuckle. She got a bit of a girl chuckle out of it too, and probably at my reaction on top of it. Oh, I can read stuff, just not to my mom. Just... thought you would enjoy that story.

    Oh, yes, obtuse has it's place! I love what can be said, is said, what shouldn't be said but is, and what isn't said that could be. Communication is such a wonderful art all it's own. And I'll admit women have a very different... side of it? Connect the words, like the dots? The picture pops out right when you aren't looking, sometimes. *grins*
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    Raf,

    And everyone else, too... Feel free to put up a haiku that doesn't fit the topic but just flows while you are at it. Won't be judged, perhaps, but will certainly be enjoyed. I like that 'ku and would rather see it then not. I don't submit mine, but from now on I will be putting up odd bits on my blog... unless the judge says to put them in.

    Definitely be back, if you can.
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    D.C.,

    Yeah, okies, true. Check last week? Just... a maybe. A notion, but probably not for all?

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  12. foam,

    Oh? I didn't know the song was from a show, let alone what movie it is from. Is the title for both? As for watching, I haven't watched a movie at the theater or after since... Well? It's been years, 5... 10? I do have older flicks, though, that I watch from time to time. I don't even have cable, save when my mother is here. I kept it this last time between her visits cause it seemed more trouble to return than hold. It's going back when she leaves this time. Still, I'd... look at a recommendation. I do have blueray and a decent tv... and the internet of course. It's not a girly "romance" movie though is it? Those are the equivalent to me what snakes/mice/such typically are to womenfolk. Eek!

    The Riddick Chronicles or (probably) the Wolverine origins story, are as close as I get to enjoying a romance! Oh, wait, there is the Prince's Bride. :p

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  13. Nataly Dawn. Mmm. Much to like there.

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  14. Meh. Short hair. And, not really my type. But if she jiggles your wiggle, all good. Of course, in real life there is room for... personal growth... but for teh fantasy things, I'm much more picky.

    Uhrm, if you know what I mean?

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  15. foam,

    By the bye, and I didn't say this before but it was running through my mind while reading... I just couldn't plug all the pieces and parts together, then remember to write it, until now... Fantastic set. That is tres bon, bildschön, and some other things like that.

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  16. You blush? lol .. hard to fathom.

    Glad you enjoyed my set and read it to your mother. I too at times share the haiku and poems from other bloggers with the pinetop and foam jrs.

    i'm not sure if the song in the video link belongs to any kind of movie. they did match it up with the riddick chronicles? is that the movie in the link? I rarely go to the movies hence I really have no recommendations.
    I'd perhaps like to see the new Star Trek movie though.
    Oh, and yes, I know you are teasing. I can handle it .. don't worry .. :P If you ever feel yourself knocked upside the noggin' though and don't know where it came from .. it was probably me .. :)

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  17. Yeah. My blushes are so rare, on such odd things, that I get a lot of favor for them. Odd for who I am, I understand that. But I have seen that light a woman or two up... I know my mom grins ear to ear when I blush. Da-da-dang woman types!

    Hmmm... Strange. My brain must be having little flickers of oddness. I could have sworn I read that someone, I thought you, had suggested the song was from a movie, and that (whoever) liked them both. Can't seem to find 'the comment' now. A dream?

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  18. But you see, "much" is not the same as "all". Yes on the hair. 'Tis a shame. But her eyes...oh! And lips, and that voice...

    And, she looks like she could be kin. Preference for one's own people group? Pardon if I happen to think highly of the Scandinavian beauty that runs through one half of my family. :)

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  19. well, i did say that the song in the video was irresistibly danceable and went well with the movie clip in one of my comments here. but perhaps you did dream the other comment.

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  20. I'm up. Early, I know, but a busy weekend looms.

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  21. Oh, I don't mind Sandies, at all. I just don't... see that. She just looks like a girl next door type. Only good if, well, she actually lives next door, though... something about her isn't my type, I can tell. She might be somewhat Scandi, but pretty Americanized, mixed. Still, I'm glad you like her.

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  22. foam,

    Ah, okay, but did you mean the movie clip as in the one that the music is played on? Or another? That may be where I am getting confused?

    Super! Up already, always enjoy visiting and seeing.

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  23. The movie clip that is with the song in the youtube link that you posted above in the comment section.

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  24. Okies. But... you have a funny way of saying things or I have funny way of reading them... *laughs*

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  25. It might be me. Effectively communicating can be hard .. :-)

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  26. Toilet seat freezing.

    Paper over or under?

    It's a moot point now.

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  27. Yawn: drowsy sunlight
    my shadow melts into me
    for contemplation.

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  28. foam,

    You know it! Isn't it odd that even when both parties are sincere and interested... sometimes that actually complicates it? But like good food, that itself seems to be a part of the draw to keep trying?

    grins,

    Oh, that first one? Yeah... especially when visiting other people! Always over, for me, even for guests. :) Good to see you visit and put in your works!

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  29. A small thing, really.
    Frost crystals. But tender plants
    cannot withstand it.

    Annual gamble;
    When to plant? Too soon may frost.
    Too late frost certain.

    Eighty today but
    thirty four degrees tonight.
    Will it dip pre-dawn?

    Not such a small thing -
    trying to get computer
    back into action!

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  30. serendipity,

    As I plant my garden, for the first time, I know those first. I waited until early/mid June this year, as my mother wished to help. It's amazing the difference between hearing/reading about those little choices and taking the risks yourself. Started them from seed, and have enjoyed them in my cave, so I hate to see even one not make it. Three of the plants I put out didn't make it, but not due to frost (so far, crazy weather!).

    As to that last? That is sort of one of my areas, so it is a little thing. The thing though? Even though diagnosing and fixing is a little thing? Like travel, everything between diagnosis and fix is a lot more than paper would tell. Uhrm, good luck if you are suffering of it lately. Danged things, loverly as they are when they just do what they are supposed to do, danged, hard, when they don't!

    Oh, looks like you are foaming! Making a threesome topical post. I really do like that. Call me a cheat enabler, new agish, or whatnot, but I do think it's cool. Good show.

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  31. I also like the set by serendipity. Wish you both luck with your gardens. We've tried, but we too shaded.

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  32. That would be frustrating... to put out the time and effort only to not have anything, or at least enough, pop to fruit. For good or ill, all I need to worry about is chair to butt magnetism... A disease that seems common wherever I go! Thanks for the luck, I may need it.

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  33. Small wonder nature
    heals our psyche; flower walk
    cleanses our bruised spirits.

    Serendipity here, contributing another, with another photo visual. Our wildflower season has been spectacular.

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  34. Small wonder nature
    heals our psyche; flower walk
    cleanses bruised spirits.

    Need to revise meter...too many syls. Serendipity

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  35. Plants and the wilds sure offer comforts and escape from buildings, offices, stupid doctors and life... Just a touch.

    Might have to try to get out to hike 'up there' this summer, if I can. I may only know that a tree is not a flower, and not even know one evergreen from another, but I know that a nap near a cool stream, trout sashimi, a bit of a hike, and fresh air do a body good.

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  36. Somewhere in this room
    There's a great big mosquito
    With my name on it

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  37. congrats and here are my entries visuals will be up tomorrow

    a smile, touch, whisper
    oceans misty fingers caress
    little moments lost


    time, patient, practice
    vines of frustration strangle
    dang sticks starvation

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  38. Michael,

    This isn't the funny contest! But that is a funny poem, mostly. And it still fits all the other criteria. Badaboom badabing, you are in.

    becca,

    Nice to see you made it. Nice looking 'ku, but I always am curious about visuals. Looking forward to seeing those to!

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  39. Haha, Michael cracks me up. Looking forward to becca's visuals too.

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  41. Summer travel: Three
    Ounces??! Shiny hair or smile,
    Not both? Shampoo bomb!

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  42. Aunty,

    Welcome. :)

    Good to see you post! Oh, but isn't that the case? Gah! I once heard about things that were supposed to do double, treble, perhaps more duties but, uhm... in my opinion, using toothpaste for hair and tooth, or shampoo for both, would have been just as efficacious... -not at all- So I guess we get stuck with fumbling through goo from time to time, hoping to salvage enough for this or that time. Ugh!

    It does seem so simple though!

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  43. Oooooo, Aunty, thanks for reminding me how much I looooove air travel! LOL!

    And Michael, aren't they all giant, especially as they approach your ear in the dark when you are trying to sleep? Ha!

    Serendipity

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  44. serendipity,

    "...aren't they all giant?"

    You certainly have a point. Like the bill when eating out? The nail you step on? The needle the doctor decides to use? Hmmm... *changes subject*

    Thanks for the cheer! :p

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  45. For this week, i'm submitting one that my 8 year old wrote in school this year as they were learning about Haiku and poetry in general.

    Fluffy puffs of fur
    Running, jumping, likes to eat
    My best friend, Princess.

    Not bad eh?! :D

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  46. Not bad at all. Encourage him! But uhrm, make sure he knows to have a day job. The pay leaves something to be desired. Sashimi, sea weed, sushi, and the like aren't bad... unless they aren't an option. :p

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  47. No splendor he said
    The people shall know me true
    Pope Francis the First

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  48. Happy Monday, DOOM!!!

    I had already picked my WINNER (not that my votes counts), but now think Blaze Jr. has stole the whole show.

    Eh... anyways, here are mine for giggles...

    First, to revisit my first submission with a linked visual:

    Sunny Summer's day
    Hang'n out; free 'n easy
    Piss'n in the wind

    (link is relatively safe)

    My second, goes a little like this:

    A wink and a nod
    Frisky frolics; cheap hotel
    mourning after woes

    (link is safe:D)

    ...and one just off the top of my head:

    If first you don't suck
    Practice, perfect; dusk to dawn
    Devil, details. DAMN!

    That's all folks!!

    Rafa

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  49. There coming in fast and furious now!
    I'll have to go see if some folks are up.

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  50. Good afternoon Doom,

    Running wee bit late. Two for your evaluation. Great turnout, thanks for hosting.

    All you got to do
    Is put part A with Part B
    The rest is easy

    1K of wire, blank screen.
    Ohm's law applies, up volts.
    And picture returns

    @Aunty: buy it when you get there.

    With 3 oz of this,
    3 oz of that, add training.
    plane will not fly home.

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  51. fishy,

    No Doubt. But then, who needs a leader of his nature who isn't going to shoot for even higher than the moon? Trying to get us even to Mars is difficult for men, by men, of men. But he isn't trying to get us that little puddle jump, but all the way. After you, I might tell him. But it seems he knows. Far easier said than done, but if he, as a general term, could wrest me in, I think he has a chance. I, urhm, hope so!

    Raf,

    Glad you made it back! Oy. You always have a very fine slice of the thing, innit? Oh, not to worry. Your first one was one of the first lessons of men who walk beyond walls too often learns. Odd thing to learn given all the warnings and advice and songs, but... We Are Men! (Said like 300 when he said This Is Sparta!) The second was the second lesson, that's all I'm saying. And, finally, I see you sharpened your scalpel to slice the last one even thinner. Blowflish soup with a hell of a flush. Not sure about swallowing.

    Karl,

    Never too late until you see the judging page. Even then, I would always be happy to see anything you worked up. And great poems. You know how to hit a man when he is down, and in the right places! Some things I can do, some things I can't, and some things I can but don't always want to do. Great poetry.

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  52. Dang! Good stuff by all. I enjoyed the one by blazng's 8 year old. My two boys learned how to write haiku at that age. Have fun picking who gets to host next .. :-)

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  53. Funny, Doom, I wasn't going sexual with my third 'ku, at all... I guess the boy who cries wolf really does get eaten, in the end:D (now that I read it through, I do see where one could go there...must be an innate thing with me. Just can't help ma' damn self:D)

    It was more a play on if first you don't succeed and devil's in the details.... ie, if you find you don't suck at something, work hard and hone your skills. What you'll find, though, is something that appears easy is quite difficult as you look deeper into the little things to be GREAT! ...And THAT (damnable details), is the crux that lifts and separates the two moons from the great divide.

    Sorry for no post this week, Foam...wasn't up to the mustering:(

    Good luck with the judging, my friend, there are some real WINNERS mixed in this bubbling brewhaus of 'ku!

    Raf

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  54. You know, at first, I thought it was sexually oriented. But on second reading, I thought not, but maybe with a hint of... twist in there. I'll take your denial at face value. From one pseudo-celestial to another, you can take my jest as such or not as you please. Simply, with your rep, why lie? *grins*

    Just reminded, by a quirk, where the devil really is, even in your own words? God is tricky too? I will take all the reminding I can get, personally. :p

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  55. foam,

    I know. I love it when I have to work at sorting because of quality and numbers. It's slogging down but the machine is running in the background.

    As I recoup a bit, these offer healing. One of the things my mother does is she throws off my mental patterns. These poems and the discerning help me put the thing back together.

    All good though, I need razzed and rousted from time to time, you know. A little help to get caught back up as well. I'll bet she has rest herself. Thing is, we both run at 100mph, just in different directions and/or at different times. I wear her out as much as she wears me out. Believe it or else.

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